I
Roaring rays
Raising ruins
Raising wrecks
Reaching rules
II
Hear Havoc!
Have hearts!
Hurt hatred!
Heal humans!
III
Love lives
Long lives
Leading lives
Loaning leaps
IV
We’ll work
When wise
We’ll win
Win wars
V
Roaring rays
Reaching real
Rest right then
Reap your rise
When we win
Amoafowaa Sefa Cecilia (c) 2o14
6 replies on “HELP HEAL”
the message is nice – so a thumb up for content – and then the style and form – two words throughout but then the last three lines have those three words – it was like an ending with a different melody to wrap it up. so another thumb up dear poet! 🙂 ❤
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Thank you Prior. Blessings.
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Wish me luck I just submitted 6 of my pieces to a gallery in New York. It’s my first time doing this on a grand scale as this
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Good luck Sheldon. It’ll end well. Praying.
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Love this form.
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Thank you very much. Blessings.
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