NOT NEGLIGIBLE (TANKA)

Free flowing urine

In storing tanks of seen beings

Really give pleasure

It’s little drops of urine

Which burn and cause eyes to tear

One would think they are

Insignificant, but no

They are those who cause burning

Sensations, they do.

Burning sensations known for

Its inter-external tears

(This poem talks about the hurt we feel sometimes about little things. It amazes many when hurtful things fail to hurt us but very little things sends us overboard. It’s nature. We all have things which get to us, but sometimes the little ones do hurt more. That is what I meant by this symbolism.)

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By amoafowaa

Just a simple Ghanaian trying to find the best in our society. I may be fun, I may be interesting, I may be funny, I may even be foolish or intelligent, but it is all based on the mood in which you find yourself. I believe our minds make us who we are. Know that, pain, no matter its 'unbearability', is transient. Unburden or delight yourself for a while in my writings please. And all corrections, advice and opinions are welcome. Know that you are the king, queen or royal on this blog. :)

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