You cunning hcterw!
You angry kcirp!
You swiny retsnom!
You worn out gip!
You cut her esool
Now she’ll suck you yrd
II
You used her emit
And flogged to lock her secnahc
You blocked her kcul
After breaking her sesnefed
You swiped her naelc
And made her nael
Parading her like a ekoj
In front of an amused ecneidua
You now have stug
To crawl back to reh?
I’m enjoying watching her kill you yhs
III
She says your thing couldn’t give any msagro
She stated your body smells like a knuks
So she tried to you hsaw
…but you felt like a dog
I can see your hteet
…look like the feet of stoggam!
Such tsugsid!
You were a mismanagement she was ginganam
It hurts when insults walked from your rotten htuom
To hurt her edirp
You are now eating your shame eip
As she roasts your oge
…on a painful hsem
IV
For she’s the ssob
You can’t anyhow ssot
For her very ssol
Will be a ssorc
…even on shoulders of NEM
And so will be worse on a mere nam
Too bad the embers spent no emit
…in burning your traeh
She never wavers nor turns after a pukaerb
I can attest to her noitatuper
Nothing will shake her to you ekat
So now go burn on the ekats
…you til
As she walks in the freshness of rehtona
Amoafowaa Sefa Cecilia © August 25, 2020
12 replies on “THE HURTING PUZZLE”
wow..you always amaze me…i hope i can assimilate that style…anaaa?
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Eh Awuraba. For me ibi bgan bgan. S3 akoa n’tumi yor a fire burn him k3k3!
It doesn’t mean some tutorials for the non sharp brains won’t do.
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Nice poem🤗🤗
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this is so classy ! 😂 lol , took me a while to decode the inflected , but was all cool after sometime . wonderfully creative . i like this your style ! 🥂😃
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Wooooww!!
Mum C, this is so wonderful. I love the style, which encapsulates, blurs, and fogs the poem and its meaning, rendering it seemingly meaningless. This, certainly, is for uncommon skulls because it is seemingly senseless until you ‘look’ deeper, further, and farther.
The piece is not inconsequential and its relevance cannot be underestimated as it discusses a very common canker in an uncommon style.
It’s a great piece.
Kudos!
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Thank you. You sure are an uncommon skull. 🙏💙💙💙
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A well foregrounded poem
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You caught on easily. You’ve a very sharp mind. 🙏💙💙💙
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