
Tell me a different version of the story
The story of Romeo and Juliet
Tell me the loving part,
And kill the tragic deaths
Whose moral uprooted not the roots of feuds in life
So I can see hope like a star in lead
And follow until I reach my sky
II
Tell me the story of The Little Mermaid
Eliminating the witch who took the best part of our heroine
And sent a talkless version of beauty
To embark on an impossible hunt of love
From one too prestigious to fall for a dumb
Give her character her voice
So she can have a choice
As to tell her lover she is who he seeks
And make her too solid to be turned bubbles
To enjoy a love so strong until happy forever after
To prepare a vehicle of hope for me
So I can travel safely to the land of Cupid
III
Why must I hear of tragedies cruel
So cruel to grind hearts into mud
And have foots step on their golden debris?
Polish the shoes of the stories so tragic
Make them cool and beautiful and magic
The world travels and can travel to waver
The unpleasantness, and help fragile hearts to be brave
I need a miracle even if it happens in oblivion
Amoafowaa Sefa Cecilia (c) 2016
Photo Credit: en.wikipedia.org
10 replies on “POLISH THE STORIES (CRAZY STANZAS)”
To be able to put your thoughts into words is difficult enough, but to express them through poetry is a gift!
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Thank you sweetness. Bless you.
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You are a truly great poet!
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Thank you sweetness. 🙂
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I luv this artful piece, Ceci.
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Thanks Steph.
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I like this concept though without the tragedy, do you think the stories could be as exciting? Or the happy parts as happy?
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I think comedies are cool.
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They are cool. They can be built around tragic premises as well.
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True but the heartbreaks always have the soothing balms of laughter and fun. Comedies.
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