Trees placed bets on shoots
Which promised to climb their world
Still the young shoots aimed
But many died being crashed by
The feet of rain and hot sun
II
One tough shoot remained
It climbed the biggest, tallest
Tree among the lot
Which bragged it was the greatest
But the shoot held on too tight
III
When short plants asked why,
It replied “I need the strength
Strength the bragged tree has
Words of its mouth are worth naught
To a clutcher and stretcher”
IV
And so it was that
The young shoot stretched in climbing
Until it locked lips
With the tree which bragged and went
On to sit on its bare pate
Amoafowaa Sefa Cecilia (c) 2015
4 replies on “DETERMINERS (TANKA)”
Such a wonderful poem!
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Thank you Nico. Blessings.
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Such stunning, powerful imagery! 🙂
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Thank you Nadine.
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