It shot very far
I realized it was a star
I guess I went far
II
Peacock in a bar
How can these feathers go far
To show without mar?
III
So I threw it far
Watched it brighten like a star
When it reached that far
IV
Oh my good good star!
Can I have you back from far?
I will be your car!
V
Too late, it’s afar
Brightening in another
Like a bright star, ah!
Amoafowaa Sefa Cecilia (c) 2014

2 replies on “THAT BRIGHT STAR (RHYMING HAIKU)”
Rhyming haiku?? quite a challenge! I can barely get my thoughts into those restraining syllables much less rhyme them!!
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Lol. I really threw a challenge didn’t I? Thanks Marissa. You really make my day always.
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