I lost a neighbor I didn’t love as myself
Not for not trying, but for the protection of my very self
My neighbor was as prickly as the skin of a porcupine
And gave abusive threats that sent shivers down my spine
He stole my wires and logs
And threatened my sister with haunting flogs
Even when I went out of my way to lend him my land
He showed me attitudes I still can’t understand
And so I didn’t love him as myself
Still, I wished him breathing, not bloated and stinking
My neighbor was a living devoted liquor bar
Not even scary sicknesses could make him stay away from the drinking jar
Don Sebastian, his benefactor who in him did believe
Tried his hardest to force him to live
But he went from bathing with it
…to swimming in it
And finally drowned in it
Although I stayed far from him
I helped in the keeping watch duty
Telling Don to force a reasoning to keep him alive
But even horses determine when to drink
Ogogoro was his true booty
So we were all pushed to the brink
Till he journeyed alone in his room
Forcing scents to announce his journey of doom
Awetu the cantankerous!
Awetu the frustrated!
Awetu the capricious!
Awetu the ever whining
…is gone
He is making me imagine my first human rot
Praying this doesn’t become any one else’s lot
No matter how unlikeable his living journey
The sorrow of his lonely transitioning
Pricks my soul
I wish for him a peace he gave his neighbors not
Making many abstain from an engagement
…with him
I wish for him a life he wished he had got
Perhaps a priestly journey
I wish for him the power he craved
Above all, I wish for him an angel who could have him saved
…no matter his nature
To carve into him
…a fulfillment I felt he craved before his horrid rapture
Amoafowaa Sefa Cecilia © June 12, 2026.
17 replies on “A NEIGHBOR I DIDN’T LOVE AS MYSELF”
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Your honesty is a blessing, even to those who resist it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you. 🙏🙏🙏
LikeLike
Great piece. Keep it up
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙏🙏🙏
LikeLike
Some hearts are so hard set in pain, shame, and hate that all love just pours over their hearts too hard to receive love. Love is shown by praying for them, even without their knowing, because if they know, they will turn and rend you. Wisdom kept you from casting your pearls of love before him. But God; desires that no one should perish but repent and turn to Him and live…so, I place those hard-hearted souls locked in pain cages, in God’s desire. It’s a hope I have that God is able to accomplish His desire and I can’t see Him surrendering any of His children to Satan…it’s just a hope but all things begin in hope, and as a vessel of Mercy, I can’t hope Hell for anyone…I think your neighbor was blessed just to have a neighbor so compassionate to bless him and not curse him.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for being so gracious. Thanks for your depth. ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m just an old over-thinker, a knot-head, a head full of tightly wound thoughts and experiences so, thank you for the opportunity to unwind some of them. Don’t feel guilty, let Jesus love you first. It’s His Love that changes human hearts.
LikeLike
Perfect. Thank you Pam. ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome, sweetie.
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙏🙏🙏
LikeLiked by 1 person
Well-written piece! Kudos 👏
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Aptly written piece, Mum Cee, to capture the realities of life. I’d like to learn more from you. Kudos 👏
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙏🙏🙏 Sure.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Aptly written to capture realities of life.
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙏🙏🙏
LikeLike