
Ugly shadows cast
On the fairest of angel
Deceiving watchers prayful
As he trains beautiful beings
To swerve them like idiots
II
Cool winds blow over
To the praying mantis’
Who look out for hot
Fanning their eyes to sleep well
Using their curses for them
III
Brightened shadows show
Attracted worshippers kneel
Loving the glitters
Shunning proper ways ahead
Ah! They dwell on twisted facts
Amoafowaa Sefa Cecilia (c) 2015
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