All ablutions apt
Proud pious people praying
Bow before Allah
II
Aboabo is chaste
Showing good of Ramadan
Abuse? Forgiven!
III
I remember a
Day after Ramadan left
Its footsteps were heard
IV
Abudu just said
“Shegia!” and his mouth was snatched
By sharp machetes
V
Amina just puffed
And her body was found in
Bosom of gutter
VI
Why can’t you stay here?
Why can’t you stay here forever?
Ramadan please stay!
VII
Stay to roast chaos
In the box of heartlessness
For peace to sit on its throne
Amoafowaa Sefa Cecilia (c) 2015

9 replies on “PIETY IN RAMADAN (HAIKU WITH A TWIST)”
We stumbled over here by a different website and thought I might check things out.
I like what I see so i am just following you.
Look forward to going over your web page again.
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Ramadan is observed so the peace in that month can be practiced for the rest of the year. That month is like a practicing drill but *sigh* we never look for the deeper meanings.
Very well written.
-Naima
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Thank you Naima. It is horrifying that the month leaves with its peace.
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Those who take the lives of innocent people and then observe Ramadan without acknowledging the message of peace within faith! Heartbreaking and hypocritical.
I think your poem shows the hypocritical nature of that very well.
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Mouth is sealed Kate. Sealed. 🙂
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Ramadan the month of blessing is coming, dear sister, Are you Ready???
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I am not a Muslim but I am ready. It gets so peaceful around that time that I don’t wish for it to end.
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❤ i'm waiting excitedly Ramadan…May Allah make this Ramadan a useful and blessed month for all ❤ 🙂
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Ameeeen.
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