
The sun’s claws of heat
And the harmattan’s beak of
Cold are different but
Their similarity strikes
They make lovely cute dawn cry
II
How two enemies
Can step on a meek lady
Is like the ladle
Which stirs fear in my mind’s pot
I’ll make no bones about it
III
But dawn loves its place
And will defend both lovers
No matter their bad
Treatment of her, that’s the truth
Nature, its place; a wonder!
Amoafowaa Sefa Cecilia (c) 2014
5 replies on “PICTURE OF NATURE (TANKA)”
“But dawn loves its place and will defend both lovers”
I love that! And the commercial π
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Thank you CC blessings to you and yours.
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OK, well I see the commercial you did not put there..so I look really clueless now…hahahaha..but it is still cute.. and I still love that line..oh wowww…I am terrified to put another comment…LOL..my mind..oh my..!
Blessings to you..I definitely need them. β€ -CC
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Chane, between you and I, there is no friction. Tell me anything when you want to. I will always be grateful for your thoughts no matter its content. That is what makes us human. Your friendship means a lot to me. π
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