
Once in a flowing dress
I walked along the sea in duress
Hoping the breeze would help caress
My soul, and tow the wrecked pain on my mind
Then I saw her;
A woman of women and men
With hair like protective bush
Too beautiful with no room for transparency
A face like God
Looking at it, none gets bored
Its beauty could cut like a sword
In her eyes, waters of love dance
Putting lookers into trance
Making all wish to in it dance
Her ringed neck was adorned with the finest of beads
In her breasts were sewn beautiful promising seeds
Her arms like a welcoming path,
Promised me a bath
No matter my thinking maths.
Her clothes of many living greens;
Some with many healing spleens
And others with many nourishing teens,
Flowed like an unseen garment
Down her flawless adornments
I bet critiques would have no bad judgements.
At a glance
I took a stance
I wanted to be her, down to her little nuances
She was all
Golden mother who would take all fall,
Working father with boiling red blood,
An embodiment of foods ready to feed
And showed all one wished to see with a shinning black star
She trivialised all I was
But I looked at her then
Looked at me
And felt strange
I was in her
That was my mother
Yes, me viewing my great motherland,
A land in Africa shining brighter than usual
A land bridging all hurdles and standing tall,
That was me watching Ghana, my motherland
I can’t be more proud, relieved and safe
Amoafowaa Sefa Cecilia (c) 2014
8 replies on “THE WOMAN I ENVIED”
Beautiful…just beautiful
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Thank you dearie. Blessings.
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I simply love this poem. It is quite deep. Just a question: do you really envy Ghana, that woman, or do you adore her? It is just in reference to your title.
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The whole idea is to a twist that I envied from afar someone that I am. I never saw myself that pretty until I looked at myself from another’s eyes. So I adore the me, in the form of my motherland. Thank you for asking.
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As you know many African-Americans make pilgrimages to Africa. We want to see our ancestral place of origin. Within the next three to six years I too plan to visit Africa, especially Ghana, Nigeria and Mozambique which is where through DNA I traced my maternal ancestors. I’m gonna kiss the ground and hug the trees when I get there!!
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I would love to host you Debbie! Free accommodation, I would be glad to do it with all my heart. People here are very hospitable, you would love being in Africa.
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Mother Africa cries out for all her lost children, those within and those stolen from her womb centuries ago.
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Yes, it still cries. The horrors of those times.
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