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BAD ENCOUNTER

At this juncture

In this structure

Where I could pride fracture

But still force to venture

I hatred nurture

Against one whose bosom I once found sweet nurture

At this juncture

Who can take this old furniture

From which I received a lovely nurture

Of my mind as I aim for the law to murder

And put us asunder?

You forced my hand

To threw our band

Into the sand

Where the sea will find

Now we battle on this field

May the best one win.

By amoafowaa

Just a simple Ghanaian trying to find the best in our society. I may be fun, I may be interesting, I may be funny, I may even be foolish or intelligent, but it is all based on the mood in which you find yourself. I believe our minds make us who we are. Know that, pain, no matter its 'unbearability', is transient. Unburden or delight yourself for a while in my writings please. And all corrections, advice and opinions are welcome. Know that you are the king, queen or royal on this blog. :)

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18 replies on “BAD ENCOUNTER”

I love the word play and the consistent rhyming scheme….
salute #GreatMomC

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Thank you very much Villagethinker. Blessings.

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Hey, just found an article that reminds me of your case a bit: http://mallarmemarmalade.wordpress.com/the-risk/

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I assure you I had nothing like that in mind while writing. I particularly find bitch an offensive word, I think it should go with dogs for men who use it. So thanks for sharing but not close.

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OK, thanks, I’ll change that word for you.

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Thank you.

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Done!

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This is great. Is it a relationship issue thing?

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Yes.

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Sounds a bit grim. What happened, if you don’t mind me asking?

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Lovers ending up in court.

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Yikes. A strange place to end-up. I wrote a song year ago called ‘The court of Love’. It was more about whoever it was passing judgement on people who were impeding others’ Freedom and not actually doing the correct thing for Love to bloom. Why would you want to face your lover in court though?

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I guess many things can go wrong. And it ends up there sadly. Many beautiful relationships end up in court. Sad, but sadness is a part of the county of love.

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What did he do to you to deserve your wrath?

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This is just a poem I wrote, might be about me, might not be about me. A famous poet once said, read a poem like you are the persona. So please let your imagination run wild.

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