Pity messed with her head
As glittering living urged him on
His ego was tingled by passion
As his eyes strayed from her
Was it her apparel?
Could it be that her flowers are wilting?
What could it be?
These and many more walked in an excursion on her mind
Her resolves were none
Seeing as her rival, like a bloated loaf
Walked like a zombie in an unfamiliar ground,
Her pride and heart sustained the highest degree of burns
She left a thousand times
Through many speeches prepared only for him in her mind
But words flew to an unreachable tree
When his face graced her environment
“Go, if you can’t,
A man must prove he is a man by owning many”
With sweat stepping on her burns,
She left to her roots
Months hardly walked into the house of a year
And his knees, as his feet, painfully crawled
To her root, a palm in a palm
Tears streaming down his face
All she had to show was her scar
But her scar was not visible
As the heart hid comfortably in its enclave
So the elders pushed her into an abyss of death
Amoafowaa Sefa Cecilia © 2014

4 replies on “A WOMAN’S PRIDE IN THE GUTTER”
Well stated point and FULL of emotion…Well done!!!
xx
Sooz
P.S. You have HOOKED me. Hehehe, I am now a fan…:)
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Awwww, thank you very much.
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Oh no…the elders. They are blind to the invisible scars that cut more deeply than anything they have ever known!💜
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Say that again Amy. It is awful.
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