Mama’s space
Is occupied by air
Mama’s hug
Is always done by the tree
Mama’s voice
Is lost in the wind
So in my many nightmares
I have no voice to call mama
Because when the trees and the air
Run there, their scare will stop my heartbeat.
Amoafowaa Sefa Cecilia (c) 2014
(Wrote this after visiting the Tamale Children’s home and meeting very young abandoned children. Seriously, life is not fair)
19 replies on “MAMA’S SPACE”
Reblogged this on sinyomoka and commented:
Let me To Remember My Mom…
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Thank you very much. Blessings.
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Really I felt so sad after I read Your Poem…Had Touch my Heart and Directly take me To Remember Me With My Mom…But Finally I’m Rejoicing cause I know My Mom in Heaven Now….
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So sad to hear that but happy you know she is in heaven.
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Thank you for following my blog. I just dropped by yours to see what you are writting about. You are quite the poet. This poem stood out to me and touched my heart. I hope to hear your comments and likes on my blog giving your special insight.I agree with you that we all can do something to make the world a better place.
Honey
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Yes we can. And I’ll definitely travel through your mind on your blog. Cheers.
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My heart ached here. ❤
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So does mine. I wrote this after visiting the local children’s home here. The innocence and purity in children without parents made me cry.
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This is a powerful lament. Spare and to the point.
Elouise
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Thanks Elouise. You also have very powerful writings on your blog. Your opinion means a lot to me.
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I see we’re reading each other’s work at the same time. That’s wonderful! I love the strength and clarity of your voice–writing about so much sorrow and tragedy and human pain.
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Life has those tragedies but from the world I’m coming from, there are so many pitiable happenings you can help but let them reflecting in your writings as a writer.
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Your country is blessed to have your strong voice reflecting them to us.
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Thank you for the compliment.
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The pain comes out very clearly in your piece! We have to write about everything don’t we? In order to be authentic and real! Thank you for being so!
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Always thankful for your comments writersdream, always on point.
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Thank you!
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Really like this one. Something I can relate to. 🙂
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Thank you for reading and commenting.
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