Losing is not a sweet potion
As it is like a stinky river of emotion
Which touches sanity and causes corrosion
And causes spirit’s demotion
But losing humbles highed-arrogance
And gives humanity in heart a chance
II
So I am taking off my clothes of wins
And accepting my gaps as sins
I am willingly sitting in the tutoring bin
Accepting critiques as my next of kins
I am submitting to loss with a raised chin
For time to prep me with assurance
Amoafowaa Sefa Cecilia © August 28, 2024
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13 replies on “LOSING TO LEARN”
Will like to learn and acquire some knowledge
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love love your dark rhymes
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Thank you.
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you are welcome ❤
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Rough! 🙂
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I do a post every Monday called Blogger Highlight where I introduce the blogger and their blog. I would love to highlight your blog, it that cool? I do 99% of the work and only ask you one question. Please say you will. 🙂
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Okay
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Cool! I start working on and will post not this coming Monday but the next. I’ll work to remember to let you know. The one question is, what is your favorite post and why? 🙂
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Everything I post, I love because they immortalize my thoughts, emotions and journey as a mere mortal.
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Ok, I’ll look around and find one of my favorite, it will be hard but I can peak the communities interest. 🙂
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Great.
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