
It was a ball
It was a ball being pressed deep
Deep into the sea
By the golden legs she needed to move
And the hands she needed for comfort
II
It was a bouncy ball
Which required all her strength,
Freedom and wealth
To keep under the sea,
From eyes seeking reverence
III
She thought of making it a stone
And keeping it in a hole
But feared a mole
And hated being seen as a guard,
A guard rooted on land
IV
She thought of making it a telecast
But feared the many pointing fingers
And the rotten teeth yapping
Like a machine wishing to impress its owner
And so opted for a ball under the sea
V
This ball, this ball has taken her life
It has taken all her wealth
And now is attacking her strength
Making her lose her grip on the ball
Oh! This ball called secret!
If only she had a way to defeat!
Amoafowaa Sefa Cecilia © 2015
11 replies on “PRESSING SECRETS”
Good job on this topic. Indeed, our conscience and secrets are huge balls of burden to carry around!
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Sadly they are, I wonder why we suffer to carry them around.
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the secrets or the burdens? sometimes we have to hang on to the secrets or risk betraying others. And if we are betraying others with our secrets then our conscience nags us. Life is complicated because our relationships are and trying to please many can get awfully chaotic.
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No one must try to please many people, that is the most chaotic thing to ever happen to a being. You try pleasing everybody and your life will suffer because you have to feel the pain another should and how many of those pains can you take?
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What secrets causes her to fall?
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Yoshiko, secrets bad enough for her to want to hide. This poem is a satire telling themes of how destructive secrets can be when all efforts are channelled into keeping them hidden. Because if you lie to hide, it will also require another lie, it continues until you can do nothing about it.
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Agree 🙂 Mum C. What about the scenario of some people who tend to show they are strong though they are weak?
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Pretence is only for a while, no matter what, real life will be made public.
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True
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