
A feeling like hope
Sits in the midst of chaos
Oh pessimism!
II
A feeling like love
Sits in the midst of hatred
Oh ye blind hurt men!
III
A feeling like wins
Sit in the midst of grave loss
Oh ye doomed thinkers!
IV
Hear the sad critic
Use the word ‘like’ in her art
Even she sees not!
Amoafowaa Sefa Cecilia (c) 2014
2 replies on “A CRITIC’S FLAW (HAIKU)”
Very good poem. 🙂
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Thank you very much dear Raul. It’s a new day here. I hope you’re doing good.
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