Long ago,
When we sat by the fireside,
And watched our shadowed selves
On the mirrored ground
By the side of the full moon,
Grandma told me to look up
And watch keenly the full moon
Knowing not what she meant,
I looked and told her I saw only a stain of clouds
She smiled and asked me to listen and look well
And I did
II
“Long ago,” she started,
“There lived a strong man
Who was a drummer
A drummer none could compete with
His source of inspiration was his love; Oforiwaa
The king of his village had eyes for this lady
And did all he could to separate the two
Since commoners could not fight royals for women
He decided to flee with Oforiwaa
Fleeing did not help
So he, with the help of a perfect moon,
Made Oforiwaa his
With the slow breeze as their witness
The moon left them, travelled
And returned,
Oforiwaa failed to get her visitor
The god of fertility whispered its presence
In her ears
The whisper was loud and so many ears heard
The King heard too
And called her to book
She failed to mention the name
Of the warrior who brought the visitor
So she was beheaded
Ofori, her man, was so sad
That he went to speak to the moon
But the moon kept moving
He looked up and saw a shape like her woman
On the moon
He resolved to join her so he could play wonderful tunes
To keep her smiling
He took his life and joined her on the moon
And yes, they formed the drummer and his woman
He, tirelessly playing his drum
She, pleasantly listening in admiration
That started a revolution of love
Because the village never got the like of Ofori
Who played to tame the gods”
III
Well, her story opened my eyes
For a brief moment, I saw them;
In their perfect happy living
And I asked myself:
Will I ever love like that?
Amoafowaa Sefa Cecilia (c) 2014
18 replies on “GRANDMA’S STORY OF THE REVOLUTION OF LOVE”
This is a beautiful story and thank you for sharing it.
Blessings,
-Naima
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Blessings. Naima.
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truly an artistic piece of work. It is engrossing
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Thank you very much. Blessings for the season.
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Merry Christmas 🙂 🙂
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Same to you. 🙂
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wonderful love story. great job!
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Yes, a wonderful story I was told. Missing my late grandma recently.
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How amazing that you can transmit these stories to us with your magnificent poetic style. Thank you!
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And thank you for reading Kate. Blessings.
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Reblogged this on Underground Energy and commented:
Wow
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Thank you dear Lisa. Merry Christmas to you and yours in advance. 🙂
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You too, Amoafowaa! I’m so delighted that I “met” you. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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You cannot begin to imagine my delight and your blessings in this life of mine. 🙂
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Love, love, love you. ♡ 🙂
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🙂
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Well Thank-You for all your wonderful posts this year. I want to wish you a Merry Xmas and a Wonderfully blessed New-Year ❤
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Same to you and your family Amber. Thank you for your posts too.
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